Banishment (end) by Cheryl Dyson

鬼、泪

伦家搬着词典看了一半...我可怜的英语水平啊啊啊啊~不过伦家才高一应该可以被原谅的吧哈~

sora

第一次看纯英的文文
不知道该用什么表情…………
查字典是件痛苦的事情

juline77

Draco's so mature and sweet at the beginning of this story, and the scene of their sex is so crazy and unreasonable.The end is funny,which makes me lol.
“Sixth year, Potter. We have a huge number of issues to work out, don’t you think? Whenever I get annoyed with you, I plan to fuck you into any available surface. That will be easier if you’re already in my bed.”
Draco,you are too evil!!!!!
为嘛我加了这么多字数还是不到呀，坑爹呢坑爹呢坑爹呢~~~

露桑娅

a hot sex. lovely draco lovely harry i like the writer
pansy had done a good job
这个作者的文都好可爱啊
这里的小哈依然诱惑～

从南

Two disjoint lines intersect in a malicious joke. Harry and Malfoy are hidden hearts will love each other.
In fact, they are just missing a opportunity together. Once this opportunity will be ripe.
呵呵，我想潘西一定气疯了。哈利和德拉科都很盼望有一个在一起的契机，没想到潘西当了红娘！
刚开始德拉科看到哈利，美色在眼前忍得很难受吧，德拉科首先想到的是哈利冻僵了给他取暖，很温馨呢。

青铜与火之王

...恕我直言...我只看懂一句TAT英语不好的孩只你伤不起...

delitto

pansy节哀~~
不过文中的harry好萌啊~~pansy也做了件好事啊
PS.我爱pansy Hermione

小紫苏

最近开始爬CD大人的原文，虽然这篇早就看过了翻译。
很多时候看中文的H和英文的H感觉真的是不同，为毛我觉得那些黄色笑话用英文讲起来会更性感呢？
CD大人的文笔真的是非常好又非常hot!

回复 9# 剑倚霜源


    'i would very much like it '前面半句與後面半句的違和感真是有意思，加上一開始的please，瞬間眼睛離不開屏幕了

yljxiaopaigu

扔个瓶盖当门钥匙的Pancy其实挺可爱的= =|||
我喜欢恶毒的孩纸，不过H真的是火辣辣啊，浴室湿身摔倒神马的。